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on 1 - 28 - 10 8:20 pm   Post
Red alpha wrote:Please don't forget about me, I'm still interested in joining!

here's my character, I put my focus on his personality rather than his power or history, so it might seems a bit copy-paste work at first but once i get a better idea of him through a good IC post it will make more sense.

Name: Alexander Morrondes Richtenwald
Age:19
Appearance: (don't mind the attire or weapons) standing at 5.8 t tall and with a slender build Alexander looks quite fit and able to participate in the Gilgamesh event. he usually goes around in grey jeans, boots and open grey jacket over a maroon sweater, not very notable but that doesn't matter to him.

Personality:
quiet and calm are his most notable traits when you first meet him. he isn't shy but usually he just tries to remain in the background, he is quite perceptive when it comes to seeing things from little quirks in someone's personality to a build up to being able to notice small changes on the flow of a battle such as the ballance between attack and defence or when the tides have turned against him.

Alexander is a nice enough guy when you get to know him but he seems more focussed on the Gilgamesh and getting out of the Labyrinth to the tower. it's not that he is cold to others, he just doesn't forget his task at hand. (will be changed throughout the roleplay to be more open to others and less focussed on fighting for his great grandfather)

History: coming from a family of great sorcerers and enchanters once known to lead many wielders of magic as masters of genetic magic. unfortunately long ago an indecent occurred where a magical experiment made by the master Elesias Richtenwald which caused the destruction of the old university and the deaths of over a hundred students and sorcerers present in the area during the incident. after all the years few know exactly what happened but the Richtenwald family was forever cursed by the guilt and shame and the exclusion of every magical institution since that unfortunate day. (details to be revealed IC with possible twist)

Alexander is a strong but relatively unknown sorcerer because of the low status of his familyline after the Richtenwald incident. like his father and grandfather Alexander lives to restore the family name and undo the damage done by his ancestor Elesias, this has had much influence on his attitude towards magic and the Gilgamesh.

Since early childhood Alexander was known to show great promise with the magic. mostly because he greatly resembeled his greatgrandfather, Morrondes Richtenwald, who participated in the last Gilgamesh to take place one century ago. Morrondes was a strong fighter because of his great power in genetic magic which allowed him to advance through the labyrinth and through the tower only to be eliminated by the would be runner up in the tournament. Alexander has trained long with his father to restore the family name by winning the Gilgamesh using the same powers his great grandfather used before: the power of the armoured beasts.

more to be revealed IC once I get more inspiration.

Ability: The Richtenwald Armour:
using magic to change his body Alex can transform his body to create an exoskeleton on insect-like shields and plates to protect his body while enhancing his body with greater endurance.

Although he is free to decide what part of himself he alters he is still young and therefore cannot make the total transformation. he is always limited to protect 45% of his body with the armour. his best and personal use of the power is to make his arms more insect-like (long, three fingered hands with poison fangs embedded in the palms and small hooks on the arms and fingers to get a good grip on his adversary) whilst completely covering his upper chest and back. but if he must he can create other forms (such as sword arms or complete body protection with several gaps between sections instead of a full segmented cover)

Wish:
his wish, just like his grandfather's is to alter history so the Richtenwald disaster would be erased from time and restore the former glory of his family line with it.


(yeah I know it's pretty basic but don't worry, once I get to use him I'll get better ideas and make him a batter character IC, also don't think too highly of his ability, enhanced endurance and sharp/venomous aren't going to assure victory ofcourse)


Like you said it's kind of basic. Because of that I find the character kind of uninteresting at first read. You also said it'd be better once you get used to the character. To be honest I don't really want members to need to get used to their characters. I'm looking for full flowing and interesting ideas off the bat and also ways in which to connect us. I can't find ways to connect your character with the others. That being said i'm going to have to say no.

However that is not the only reason i'm saying no. I was actually going to close the recruitment today anyway. I'm happy with the members I have. Sorry to those missing out.


Now for the members i.e Desol, Val and Shuffle. Heres the lowdown.

Shuffle - since you're away for a week you can enter the rp at that point. Not all characters arive at the same time in the story so this will work just fine.

Desol - Not all of our characters are going to be teaming up right away. I've been trying to think of a way to get us together and this is what I would like of you. By all means do your own thing however I would like your character to be introduced to Genryu (see first post for details) and basically team with him for a brief period. I'm giving you control of him. Basically think of him as the wise old master. He's a sensational martial artist who incorporates hundreds of stlyes and methods. He has a dislike of young people though so be sure to make a point of his constant "youth is wasted on the young" type mumblings.

Valentine - You will be on your own VERY briefly. My character, Karyu, will initially meet and team with Fuu and then shortly after you will join Fuu and I. Then Fuu and Genryu, who are on the same team, will want to find each other and we will all meet in the process.

So hopefully I'll have this up tonight or tomorrow night.

Again sorry to all who couldn't join.
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on 1 - 28 - 10 8:31 pm   Post
Dang... I was too late =[
well... i guess no worries Kyo.
Mebbe next time Ill get a char up faster.
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on 1 - 28 - 10 9:09 pm   Post
Ah snap. I should have seen it coming I guess with a character like that. I messed up by trying to keep in mind your advice about trying something outside my normal field of roleplaying and therefor did not make a character out of a power but just added it while building up from the personallity.

oh and by the way (have to blow off some steam: watch out, rant ahead!) you'd think it's hardly necessary to have your character completely written out and ready, especially if nearly everyone decides to go with the 'to be reviealed during the roleplay' solution on writing background story. I mean, I loved to keep those little plottwists and secrets also hidden from my fellow roleplayers and not just their characters (most notable example was by attempting to mask a murder mystery roleplay with a casual roleplay untill I would kill off a character of mine) but its a rather noobish thing to do all the time. a decent roleplayer shouldn't get into trouble with keping player knowledge and character knowledge separate (why else would we have charactersheets?)
(sorry for the rant-ism I'm tired and more easily annoyed by these little noob things I still had three years ago)

Well anyway, enjoy the fights. I'll search for something else.
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on 1 - 28 - 10 10:04 pm   Post
Red alpha wrote:Ah snap. I should have seen it coming I guess with a character like that. I messed up by trying to keep in mind your advice about trying something outside my normal field of roleplaying and therefor did not make a character out of a power but just added it while building up from the personallity.

oh and by the way (have to blow off some steam: watch out, rant ahead!) you'd think it's hardly necessary to have your character completely written out and ready, especially if nearly everyone decides to go with the 'to be reviealed during the roleplay' solution on writing background story. I mean, I loved to keep those little plottwists and secrets also hidden from my fellow roleplayers and not just their characters (most notable example was by attempting to mask a murder mystery roleplay with a casual roleplay untill I would kill off a character of mine) but its a rather noobish thing to do all the time. a decent roleplayer shouldn't get into trouble with keping player knowledge and character knowledge separate (why else would we have charactersheets?)
(sorry for the rant-ism I'm tired and more easily annoyed by these little noob things I still had three years ago)

Well anyway, enjoy the fights. I'll search for something else.



well you're entitled to be angry. In regards to Valentine's mystery history (yay rhymes) he has the advantage of having discussed all of this with me including his character. That way I know (yet nobody else does). If you had wanted some hidden stuff you could have pmed me and discussed it but you didn't. Your character profile was fine but it was pretty much lacking anything defining or bold. There is so much of this roleplay that isn't planned out but also there is SO MUCH that I have planned. There is quite a lot of depth that I haven't provided to everyone simply because from my experience giving so much info from the get go is overwhelming and hard to take in. That said I didn't dislike your character and I hope you understand that. What I wanted from applicants was ideas and creativity. I know that me and Val do have this major advantage that we talk on the phone verbally. This makes it so much easier for us to discuss how our characters interact and how we can have them bond with each other. But part of my decisions on the members I chose was because I thought long and hard about if I could connect them and how I would try to do so. I am sorry that you didn't make the cut and i'm sorry that i've had to explain myself. Though I'm glad I did so without throwing the word "noob" around.
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on 1 - 28 - 10 11:26 pm   Post
Duly noted, Kyo. I assume he will have Plot-Based Immortality.
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on 1 - 29 - 10 8:03 pm   Post
Yeah you can't kill him off he's important lol. Basically you can't kill any of the NPCs in the first post without my giving the go ahead to do so as I have future plans for them all.
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on 1 - 30 - 10 9:42 pm   Post
rp is up. enjoy.
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on 2 - 3 - 10 6:05 pm   Post
Ah, you guy's didn't get as far as I had thought you would. That's good 'cause I can start from the beginning then.

Kyo, is there anyplace you'd like me to start out? From the info I've read about the island the terrain changes a lot so can we describe our own locales or do you have some set in mind already? I'm just going to go with some sort of craggy beachhead area. Though: are there any other types of Oni you've come up with. I'd like to write out a fight scene but I don't want to just do it without asking. If I don't hear anything from you I'll strike it out until next time.

Anyway... I'm stuck at a train station for 6 hours so I'll get to posting. I'll check back here for any info before I do, though.

Let's have some fun.
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on 2 - 4 - 10 12:53 pm   Post
A post is halfway done. I've been trying to do a long one.
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on 2 - 8 - 10 11:41 am   Post
I hope you're satisfied. Took me a while to get it out.
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on 2 - 8 - 10 8:38 pm   Post
Nice all of you. Happy with that. I'll post asap. Until then I'll provide a quick synop of our path to the second arc.

So we're all more or less at the beach/jungle area. Now the Jungle is full of exotic, living plants. Think Jumanji. Big flowers that eat you. Sentient vines. Poisonous barbs. Very Very dangerous. The ruins are slightly safer although there are much more Oni there.
Basically through events we will move through the jungle and eventually be split from Fuu and Genryu.

As a team we will proceed to the next area which is a frozen tundra. Extremely cold and treacherous. Probably have to cross some very thin ice flats. Run into some real bother with a new type of Oni that are not unlike big yetis. We will be introduced to team Trident and then, towards the end we will briefly be introcuded to Black Tower.

After this we will reach the Spire. I know I said the island has many different areas but we aren't moving through them all as that would be...well silly. its not a tour we're going straight for the centre.
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on 2 - 8 - 10 11:00 pm   Post
What kind of Oni hang around the temples? Just so I can describe how they look and fight to your specifications!
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on 2 - 9 - 10 3:43 pm   Post
Well they differ. I described them in my first post. They are somewhat similar to ninjas I guess. Although they are silent and you can only see their eyes. Unlike an actual ninja they are somewhat magical. They can move incredibly quickly and seem to be able to phase into the shadows. Despite looking very similar they are all individual and have their own thoughts and feelings, which are 99% hostile more or less. The way they are is simply a result of their environment. Blending in and moving silently is the easiest way to survive for a long period of time in that jungle. As for their weapons they will carry various weapons be it daggers, swords, spears what have you.
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on 2 - 10 - 10 8:57 pm   Post
Okay I posted. Hopefully we can all move towards meeting each other now. Make that your focus for now. If you have any questions pm me or hit me at my hotmail account ronin_heart@hotmail.co.uk

And for some homework as we progress through the first Arc I want you guys to think about each others abilities. In this arc we will be introducing our characters and their individual abilities gradually. However in the next arc we will discover that although we are accomplished seperately we need to learn to fight as one. So I'd like you guys to think about how you can combine your skills to help one another. here is an example:

Karyu could create one of his exploding fireballs and volley it to Jun who could hit it with his bat to increase it's range and impact strength.


and that was just off the top of my head so there are plenty of options.
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on 2 - 10 - 10 9:38 pm   Post
Alright, Kyo. I'll follow your instructions in my next post. And that's a cool example of combing powers. So when we have fights with the other teams it will be team vs team all the time?
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on 2 - 10 - 10 9:50 pm   Post
Won't always be Team vs Team. Sometimes it'll be that. sometimes there will be a sort of gauntlet involved so we have to meet certain tasks on top of fighting each other to win. Other battles will require members of the team fighting each other solo.
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on 3 - 7 - 10 11:07 am   Post
*bump*

Sorry! I'll do something ASAP. I know it has been 10 days, so I'm just posting to show I haven't forgotten this.
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on 3 - 8 - 10 10:51 pm   Post
I'll get a post out ASAP, Desol. Are Val and Kyo MIA at the moment?
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on 3 - 9 - 10 9:46 am   Post
I've been pretty busy with some financial issues i'm having at the moment, but i should be back to RPing soon, like today or tomorrow, as for Kyo he has a heavy workload as well as college but i know he's on here regardless most days and he'll post as soon as he can. ^_^
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on 3 - 14 - 10 9:43 am   Post
I am p much just waiting for posts ¬_¬
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